DAY TWO: Progress

Editing went well today. We synced up our beautiful soundtrack with the footage we had managed to get over the weekend and after even more cutting down, we managed to get our film to a neat and tidy 1:20
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Here is some of the feedback we got on our first edit and how we have solved this:

• Initial shot is too long (it has since been halved in time)
• Sound gets 'ridiculously' loud for a few seconds (oops! lowered this volume increase considerably)
• A little bit of a confusing storyline (with the added footage hopefully this wont seem so glaring)
• Continuity errors (for this, we decided to have titles against a black screen rather than over the action. That way the scenes flow more seamlessly and there is no dodgy transitions between shots)
• Music is great (boo yah.)